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One point I want to highlight is how the piece is able to show the action of falling, of course further than actually saying it explici...

must sadly come to an end. Today is the final piece in this poetic month of April. I hope everyone had a chance to read new poetry and engross themselves in the art--maybe even learn a new style in the fervor. This is the final posting of the blog, and consequentially, probably the last poem I do for awhile--just to get  a chance to do prose again. Here it for your delectation:

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Ben M. Walls
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writer and aspiring poet. I wish to publish work so that a wider embrace can come to poetry as a whole - hopefully bringing a betterment of the art as whole in the process.

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~ElRinaZuza Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
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Would you like to make a critique on this?
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~ohio-writer Feb 2, 2013  Student Writer
the artwork or the blog?
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~ElRinaZuza Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
artworks
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~CelestialMemories Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite. :star:
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^namenotrequired Jan 3, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Thank you for watching me :hug:
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Mood: Relief ~ElRinaZuza Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm back!
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~ohio-writer Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
and with some of your best critiques yet!
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~phillipskid32 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just wanted to thank you for the criticism of my poems that you've given lately. It is truly appreciated. I'm really trying to become a better poet and around here advice is hard to come by sometimes, so thank you.
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~ohio-writer Sep 17, 2012  Student Writer
You are very welcome. Just be sure to read as much as you can write about real things - and you'll be surprised how much ground you can cover with just those two things alone.
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*lantern-rose Sep 14, 2012  Professional Writer
Happy Birthday!!! :happybounce:
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